【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
! O& Z& R$ }% M% ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ r; {1 Q* B. \. dThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. V" Z* N7 u/ F9 A- S$ ZFrom the first moment we met,
7 h; V, n9 g8 w9 r+ ?5 K- o7 @$ EI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
4 [6 ^0 J4 e( @! m/ fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" `: Z. k  O3 H8 L) z5 o' aI would probably know how you feel
! \, X' x0 v. ~) d+ `: Q( o9 F) ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% \; {  l/ w; W; o+ _4 K* ]But I never did
' W" f: v6 E: ^3 v) |9 kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# A# B( {* w* _. uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# y3 r2 q4 i( y5 `4 T  g8 i2 jCan I entrust it to you?
! q9 g8 ~# p; Q, H6 D) L6 j0 yEntrust my love within your heart
: Q. P1 x" E* tLove… just the word love
" h7 V8 q% a" B7 C- @9 P" vWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" B) c+ G9 O) g% C" H. vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, |' s- S- }4 E+ OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

# `, H! I. R7 s[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: o& f3 j- }2 s& W+ F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ }! P4 {% j; }7 b9 s0 r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: G1 b# Y! s$ R9 \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* ~: Q; j. h9 m0 ~<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% W* S! |, g* I5 K<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 s# A9 g  ~1 U2 J% V! C<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 [) P; _+ r) J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 L8 t: |: M; X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% ^1 g) C' u7 q4 Y; p8 f: y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  G! O( \* d9 R' |" D5 Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" y5 g" @6 a7 R8 ~; P( y) L2 o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  l6 l9 s6 U3 `$ E+ A<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 p  }2 g$ Y' P7 a; U$ k<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 a: b6 ]9 B: X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! h3 B: w" n; ?5 r# S' _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 y( L9 ]5 T9 v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! }! [7 D& `3 x- V* S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. ]2 W$ I3 o" ]. W: Z2 F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  k% ]" r' `) O: V) F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# M0 m- q0 V1 o<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 G5 Z6 F' ~- T- U: i" `<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ s. u3 v: y2 O* X<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 C4 |0 m  y3 L( F& }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# `9 @, X# O7 ~2 K  t* d: ~0 p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 \! i  ^) j2 S& h& C9 |. U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& m$ v( d  g3 S" V8 i' W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( \1 o, I" n" x# ~) c/ y5 p# f$ C<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 G, o$ l9 H. Y1 M( l1 ?9 Z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- T* {- d' M7 B  \0 r这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( s" A. _) w; ]/ E' v) s这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, V& [( _4 J2 J1 j5 n  b8 k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>