【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
7 I2 L% Y/ l0 kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, \# s+ S7 X4 F& O0 L0 wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
5 p: e) Z% E0 f. U7 BWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' a; F& A/ r: w" W! vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 r3 w# v/ h% t6 B! {& ~) O2 f7 j$ @I want to confess that I love you,
$ \) c7 \7 O( X9 b% G* VBut I never did
# c; a. Z4 J3 f+ O8 I0 _2 B# SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 I# x& {5 N; T/ F% R; n5 aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& `8 G3 |1 h: ]7 rCan I entrust it to you?
. R* R9 f) {  g& J" ZEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 }& D! |  T9 [) u. X  V% f& rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, [9 D6 E# a2 }" V. ]4 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& j) [6 V9 e$ D8 {: X* JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 N" r) u5 N2 R6 H  d& X( J# L/ iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 u1 c, n# w' x2 `Can I entrust it to you?
& i* X) P( N, D+ LEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- ]3 @. {, L3 `. [Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 _7 V$ Z  c0 b# N0 X2 v1 c<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- b; ~  F& Z+ Q0 X: _# h3 j8 n" N<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 ]9 A- E) ^& @2 v/ o* ]<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 K1 y& N3 [+ O  w  n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  s6 G% E  d  V<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 F+ ^3 M& u6 w: ]) Y" X  j5 u% K<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 }& q/ ?* O  D; K<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
. ^. |" [9 u0 H2 N* j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ P/ W6 I% h+ x. K5 |4 J0 @<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 d( Z+ c% J+ w5 g. ?% e' m. S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 i+ g0 C. e& s& _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 E7 h3 H/ F4 o( ?: q3 V! i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ d! f8 [& T- M3 ~, _! t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& H2 ~$ j) b% V, L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* O1 a  }+ H" K$ P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  [/ d' O) F1 O5 p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% ~: a& x8 @* K' a4 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( Z. @  Y' \' P" p6 R  }; a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- Y; O+ g$ E6 D2 L<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 ]1 {, y4 ]( f: F6 G4 ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 N& V; d: P) v9 ^<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) T1 F& h: ]! Q% C7 I' l& ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 n% d  k5 Y* K+ n9 U1 b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; ^( v# Z8 B3 f  s7 A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& K3 i* y- A2 @. o) n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 ~+ r+ L4 L% ?# p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) Q) Y; K% W5 z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- x3 O% S  w" B1 x" R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 K1 L. ]1 ?: W8 D( P( g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 m8 Y2 d2 U! p/ ~8 X<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 Q% m8 Y( w9 ?- ~" _<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>