【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 ?" X8 T2 s9 n" a4 X* M# n; i我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 y5 h, R+ K0 T6 g3 O5 J: ~That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& J) v: a7 p4 Y  i8 l0 uFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) u! t/ R* D1 }5 x% L+ W  d9 RWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
2 a! _; A5 k  \& U7 l* y4 \# xWhy is it so difficult to express?
  M+ s* R# k% x1 c; o( VI want to confess that I love you,
5 `9 t; G# p( j/ ]: P& \But I never did
( f+ u1 g4 Y2 y3 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! t5 v1 l' U( w* U8 G; iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' f* M. t  w4 ~1 RLove… just the word love
3 B- V/ H  X1 R) }- AWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 I# I: k9 V, H- E- \6 WI want to confess that I love you,
7 }. f, m+ N- y! M8 dBut I never did
9 T0 ]6 k; [. d- |/ t* ?4 z9 COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 K" Z+ y, u$ d' V$ p6 `% i& Y0 \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 E* {0 D' Z0 @2 yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! q3 @4 h/ ~: ]3 t6 K* Y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 s/ t+ |4 D& e0 \9 g5 y' w6 `" O9 K0 P<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 |) O4 Q9 N* Y# J! C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. M% I! E7 X2 h+ i& z1 t* f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. n  O6 b* o6 r; _- l7 _/ C  @7 ]) w<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ ^: K/ g, u5 ?7 l/ T- p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* e1 y7 q! S: ~; b: P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 `" p7 W+ S$ w% F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& l% Y% w2 v& \% ?9 o6 Y4 L" \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 i1 u9 `& [. s<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, p( Q- _7 V- P( \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# H4 J5 I  V7 I& n+ ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" x: w0 {# W! q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 E' O3 s( p( ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' {, F7 L2 @3 D1 E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ n! y  a* o6 G3 ?( w3 d$ o5 s) L! J<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 E' e: P! x) J3 W& U3 f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" }5 e* A" W! W: ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( o2 ?6 v$ c) e& R<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" m3 y. e  w- ?7 y3 f<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# G( J+ u, i1 C+ E( n<P>But I never did </P>
$ r4 B1 V: l8 t4 `2 V<P>但我不会 </P>
  G* S+ \% ?: R) n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, E% ~4 U4 `* p7 {$ m' w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& G9 O' \- {- _+ X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ \: ]( R# Z0 x; D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% V4 Q3 t5 N* w, o' e8 E* C" x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ I5 t6 Z" N9 W) O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 W0 u$ O' p& D; y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 B: y# d1 H! l# }9 B<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. {4 t7 s; U5 ]1 `这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>