【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( ]6 W8 X3 m$ A  P) B- ~From the first moment we met,
- @- v5 }+ ]: o! e" E! Y2 P* yI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ }" Q  L, e  g9 iIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 }' r7 L# t4 I; UI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  \. p& d6 l% N. d; h1 sWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 A1 i, g) o: |' M& v9 h* U; n: q+ H1 QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 B3 P( O' N, a- V3 AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  z4 l8 R' F6 S) V" k. L" ]9 JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" U, a8 w: l* o9 t- m5 u& }$ S: dI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# ?  v$ ?$ X3 A& l( L7 M! e' k3 gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 V; o0 N2 C( G& W. oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% c7 n( |3 j' y8 v1 A; x6 }" _* y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 P. y7 U% }6 V$ t5 k<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: J! M& X4 p& K+ C- x0 A<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 w% C& r' M: a<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ _; g9 Z; ]' R2 E6 q2 U& G<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ X8 T* e) @+ w<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! S1 E/ ?1 \5 M* _- S: n& ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 z3 m; G% K/ ?% E1 h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ c7 R, Q% m% T& d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" _; c2 r  u7 H; Y7 P<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 _6 ]3 |0 ]( T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* ]. ~+ d% M& w3 E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ V; P5 A4 x$ C( I<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( M; Z- v8 e+ x% S<P>但我不会</P>
9 t8 r4 z. r; w0 X<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! H0 R  V4 l6 B* g+ a% c6 z+ i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 D/ Y7 f/ Q; j<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' w0 A( ~/ J3 b8 R1 n* O. P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) B  f8 n0 U6 C; N. X# c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 k9 o1 D% c0 p. Z* U* w; ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 e1 I1 L6 b' P3 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ q' g$ `1 |! A# U' Y8 d7 D5 [<P>But I never did </P>
4 V) Y. g, D1 H: @, ~( j<P>但我不会 </P>
5 d2 O7 }3 j" K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! X2 W; Y% e& @( K) q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ f6 U# U4 u' @8 @+ [7 y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, G+ |2 Q3 h) P* Z  s8 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' s9 c1 Q7 Z# Z% ]8 [% a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 C5 c; ?0 s' p5 F/ G# F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, p; p4 {* D& p, i% g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ p9 G1 ?, i( _6 J. X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) q9 ~# U1 l$ z  U. H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- o$ y/ P$ m5 J, Q/ C; e<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 S/ H' J5 l; o! u" }; g1 p 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) M& c7 b! Y  F: n) E6 }  T& o$ E<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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2 E9 g2 S! [0 ^' ?8 ?" b3 Y5 l& g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>