【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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) {: V9 Z, k+ Q& @我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
! s6 C/ e0 M( I, r9 R# F  iI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) K9 B3 q" R/ d5 C# [Why is it so difficult to express?
- Z' b, [! D1 r, f8 bI want to confess that I love you,
, N0 A% S4 J' W0 W3 G8 uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 ^+ ^* N5 G; b) }$ gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. ?( v- C! g: l7 t# R* H( R8 hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 M. p( m7 H9 m& I+ n" dCan I entrust it to you?
( Z$ }3 y. d" i2 L8 f4 cEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 ]( C( a" N* |: DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. h, E- D3 P/ w/ o) CIf today isn’t too late,
9 @0 ~$ l+ S% Z1 K' NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ M0 T& ~& t  S7 bCan I entrust it to you?
4 N% @5 ~0 x- MEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
; P, t" ^1 ?/ G/ Z' \Entrust my love within your heart

5 l" m1 B$ T: [[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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0 l# F3 d) B% C<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( W# `0 ]5 T- y4 W5 T' i7 V<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ ^; h8 g3 M$ B% P6 x- M5 A<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ i0 ^" F9 E  j1 G; B3 s: O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* u: D+ F, k6 n; n+ q# J: _% Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 c4 X0 y( s- J" {, z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 C- `: E3 U' D; t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: a2 C/ a. l, y& Z" i  M" R: x<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! F- h! c% ~, @- N& W# n<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 m5 s  |; o  W0 A7 O+ P<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  F: g3 E/ V% i5 o2 x8 [0 ]9 N9 g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 t0 Y& R# `/ J<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" @/ t: s2 `, j- b- h<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ W' L9 N5 d" k1 S- X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" u7 A0 i: `+ X' c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% H9 b7 \) C4 h( D* ]" B) v* A: N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. n- ~" d2 ~" A- g9 H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 n% Q% D: y2 E3 {' Q2 r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; R$ y0 J! W- k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 Z+ z( w' f) L: o/ Q2 g7 D<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 ]6 h' E6 e/ G+ K3 x<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ Y/ b9 w4 a, C8 c; `<P>但我不会 </P>
( l0 r  W/ u3 |+ _<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; m. Z" y. j  X: h5 q9 ?& Y) w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ W. W: X1 f% W( H0 |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- O% }) G) f& R% a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; L9 L( j) S" ~; d0 ~+ q6 L3 s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, X8 Y) i* s$ Y: _. f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ W7 w  t4 ~3 O6 O- `8 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# y/ T% D& i* V. c5 r6 l# @" u0 x, c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 c$ F# K+ V2 v% H  q  `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ D9 R& L; [8 e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>