【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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) \, N3 G& C8 ~  g0 P2 Q8 M我另将歌词附在此。
* T0 l! F6 N0 d8 F5 {/ pThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ R' Y/ P/ i8 Y" ?4 zI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
" B3 c  m( L0 o3 vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ B  D; J5 ], v- m. aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 K0 q; u! L6 \! mI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 D1 M  s9 P: W( g- T1 kI want to confess that I love you,
' u! q1 F/ N0 L1 \6 V) ABut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. F2 `7 U2 L) U- E) @: B( q9 vIf today isn’t too late,
6 N0 d6 e# F6 @: x4 t- }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" ^/ e! }  B# ICan I entrust it to you?
* ]+ @: y# i- b8 g# o; \Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) |" t6 c' Y: f4 }; QI want to confess that I love you,
/ |% t8 [4 s. L# |But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: b- x" y. [8 x, Y! E8 _If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- b8 S- H4 m; L- y1 F" rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: S+ ~1 C+ G: C; e9 C( j1 \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! R  `( _- b  V3 O# _/ X8 ?) R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 a7 c2 M% ^# y# M- A4 n; x: m1 w<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 Q6 R1 b6 x+ q8 `* _, {1 ~/ n5 S8 t1 U<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, m- d7 Z4 ~5 O0 r0 \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 u+ B5 Z. Y% i$ `9 l<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 L, O2 j5 G& z5 `! M<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ J4 [/ Y2 b" L+ ^, T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 ]! m! W/ W  y- |' V$ C% G6 E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! c0 d7 L4 M  [& k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! N: A) O6 t7 F& E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" Y# V4 C5 D' x* p7 P+ f% X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 |8 D* `' c7 Y4 Q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 Q( E/ d0 [  r+ G. X) B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. P8 k7 i- U' x0 a5 N6 J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 I8 H& H( D9 `/ b: ]# \% h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% F6 M: }& E5 S! {0 [! m# \$ l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, |  o1 O. e) |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& j  T8 E: ^7 J' O& p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 h' P4 ?& w1 ?<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 t8 C4 c! c7 D+ V3 [! E<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 @2 F% x7 P7 i3 M4 x" b* P) D9 o. p2 x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, G$ r8 {: I: I! J) J6 v/ r6 q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 q) K, F' o: j6 g3 D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ s# c% X, u  b, J" f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. Y4 E! O! D0 I& b" G) ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 ]0 Q$ Y! H) z+ F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ J9 z( ~% u$ l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# @) m/ ]: i! z1 z6 C6 t- E& e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 r' Y; ?: c! z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>