【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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5 h: }6 y! A4 u0 p* k我另将歌词附在此。
3 \1 G7 |) s$ U! T# k  N$ xThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
' _7 X( Q: L7 D, @I already loved you with all my heart
, H9 R2 T4 ~) D2 O/ wWe meet and talk everyday,
- Q, [$ L, g/ w$ I/ `But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ e4 y0 v* r& |+ I  g3 pBut I never did
( \% @% g, n/ _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( N) A) B( t& W$ B4 vIf today isn’t too late,
0 W& q) u2 p: X8 p( W$ FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 R1 @  P6 Y8 `) @! ], o# I( h; vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# b4 z+ G! C) m. ELove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ {1 a8 T- F- t) s0 gI want to confess that I love you,
* Z" @4 T; P! w# z9 |+ ]9 P( D- [But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; j: t4 u% T2 J0 H$ `+ II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# g1 c0 U4 n6 V# x: H% `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 W: [6 ?  h5 N$ sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 x8 o3 l: O# z1 z0 ?<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. D) J  s0 P2 l( K2 \! e" z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 p8 w0 [3 V  t5 Y4 n& \<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, m- I$ z' _4 V<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 D2 \3 m* ~2 G3 K( A<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# M- h% _9 u: x7 p$ b" i# C* @% W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 ~: e) v( K8 f+ L4 \/ f1 ]1 C& F  O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) a- `' Z5 L4 k$ w/ G& R* p<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" L: A- w: j! q' H2 ]0 P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 d6 S" X% L* |) }0 c) ^$ @9 D6 h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( |# R7 ]/ b# S! V; I4 z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, }4 _2 P5 w, q4 g8 {<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( E" s! G' h* R0 N, J; }9 y; t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 G; M* [  g% K: p! @<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- m  L% l( Y$ y1 M( t& G  @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 \# ~1 g  W5 b<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 b2 q) J  A5 {7 S; J; k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  L" G! ^1 B4 k$ \8 q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 r3 H7 ~4 P" \5 L<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- J( ?7 ?6 ]0 ?* r" F<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& J0 {: ^$ B. {. _& X! n) D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 T3 R' ?# R; w  f# h& M9 T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 g& R/ W3 A# j5 z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# i/ @7 _4 S5 k* [! e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: V0 t0 y& {, k8 n4 W! K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 Q2 V5 ~! _& U5 {- k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& f- i0 c4 O5 Z% `$ b$ ^2 \/ b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: R3 N8 u3 R4 ]! X<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>