【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
. n# H' F( B) w7 f1 r) T1 nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* c& a( |5 T7 l+ Q/ @, i: vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
$ m, P: f4 z' cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ Z  @1 F# b" ]2 j0 OLove… just the word love
, O) A+ o9 x, G  W( Z# J% [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' S" s; t6 O( w9 m! lBut I never did
. {% _) K/ C3 m# \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ v& l! ]6 d9 O, I: h9 |3 oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ Z2 D" r7 x+ h( ?+ TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) _, _, V) Z+ O/ v' E/ N$ I" f  }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 p# X- a- j+ f5 ]  YIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; Z* Y, [! Y8 ^% k2 CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 r/ l/ k  G8 U% aEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ u8 f: l- A- ~9 EEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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) X* ?5 k, T  K, u<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 [6 x) C6 z" v! X4 z2 Z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 Q" O5 m) s, Y8 I* ^' H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' P$ J0 V/ V6 X# U<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 y1 l. }4 S# g+ `<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( p( k0 D9 T+ B3 s5 }<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 ?/ }- L  |+ \! S' P6 b* T<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 K0 T+ l  Q+ X* [& R<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) R: Q. @8 ^1 u0 ?4 \( d' D<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# B# e$ n3 S# Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  R4 ^; Y! O2 i7 X" p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 ]. F- E- o$ v( y' c. G& ^: F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ A9 h% Q8 a8 h6 s( N( u9 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 B3 M+ N$ S9 M9 i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. X  Q& h, G& l2 F0 p  H  Y" o<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 t. k2 Q; Y- S) ?& A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- P* {/ {+ T1 h& w# g! _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( {. ]$ ]: u" {! D* P! G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 |; Y; g# b8 i3 J% K<P>But I never did </P>
4 \% C; p: q, `/ `<P>但我不会 </P>
( o8 T, r( X4 M/ k8 N0 N<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# u3 }) m9 s" O0 \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 p! t, h. S3 I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% \- X, p$ R) D% g: z: e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 p8 M: ~6 \+ H+ j1 h7 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& x* A5 C) b0 v6 p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 Q- ^$ N4 n( ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ n7 h% t( [. f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 C6 Z! B' E4 ~' N8 S' ~, P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ X1 f* y4 P9 |2 y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' z* M' G6 H2 i 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ a4 _$ G; y$ ]) C" ~& e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>