【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; u8 Y- ?, Z) N歌词我附在后面。
- d* ]7 r: s: U  H* ?' V$ l* u" FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 ]  y* {* n6 F  A( Y# |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) s3 {$ R2 c- o; K: ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 J3 o: J  p, c, i, B+ o* e( mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  _( l8 p8 Z6 Q4 r! p' }9 SMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 y* B) r% t  K6 HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 u; l+ r  @* ]# y5 M2 ZI love you I love you with all my heart
; u) B& Z7 [$ [9 PNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 x" x( t) u9 U1 G$ F1 x* g* mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
0 _% J) Q5 D3 W  v, SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% x1 ?& W0 w4 k& t" lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% @, ?( t. j% r8 D0 ^With such a tongue as yours,
* t4 U' J( Z" @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! x6 j+ S: H  xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* L2 F. I) J4 O) B7 VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 u. ^% L  E) E5 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ P  P7 l* V. M+ ]% \/ u  G& c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" w% G' ^% C( ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ c, ]% D" j6 j7 |+ W) C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 F+ U6 Q* q7 a% y1 A# V. A, {9 m4 C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& H; ?# J6 X' d# I; _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 `! v4 Z* o, [' h7 O$ C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 m6 s$ m+ O0 s<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) R5 B7 ?! D2 m8 G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& q  P/ }& U2 ~) z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, {, D$ g0 Z0 Z: h% w% `5 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ u& O- Z* R4 a' H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; x% W7 d2 R! O! h8 Q5 p% D. T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 L+ H( b1 j% S: C2 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 l+ x! K- n! W- m; J. m$ g! z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 z, l! ~4 _2 V5 b9 T: B7 L. p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' G" F* A6 Z$ {3 o: H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 J9 c' J% y7 a# c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 q- O! H5 @7 e! V! s* R7 E: P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! Q7 U+ ~. T" `  P+ _1 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 d& O8 K$ m8 A: ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- Y) t  a/ K: W* s1 P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 q9 g% z1 E. b, _; B( t0 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ z5 l% E! _3 j. O8 g0 G<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! y: a. P6 p5 I( C7 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ F- ]( q, b6 q4 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* @- C' X& x) R1 R0 H+ P1 m" }5 K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# |+ ]) X1 u/ t9 l5 l9 H( \2 w我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ l' X4 |/ F+ m# |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>