【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* c: ]7 p6 P+ D' l0 Y1 I歌词我附在后面。
- g. F/ l& t, LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 Q- s9 z; K  H4 _Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 ?& r, F3 ?7 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 K: G2 C2 B& GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  A. z! a' g, @5 c4 h9 kSeeing the sky content with its love
# Q3 H" Z: {! q1 L; h. \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% S" g7 \3 R% e) e6 f( PYou needn’t fear anything
$ ?! }# I' g* y1 j6 @- ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 b, Q& _- O( I: FEvery other word you utter is love
4 [; ^  U- o: s2 \I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 d. m6 ^# f0 m; p2 r9 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 j) s' D. s" t( [4 k. y2 ]0 ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. @% T! P  @8 I- ]" ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) N4 b  {0 A6 I/ H5 hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! o. ^9 T* @  l  t# E8 F- [7 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, P8 w! g  o3 |$ \, H. o<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: L0 Q, F4 s3 }<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 S$ Q8 x+ L, _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 X; r0 ]  ]# ?% A, n! ]2 w* @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. s9 y$ i" i. O" F; q5 J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: q# H3 N$ C; f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 m& |) K4 U; s% J: @$ O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 N$ R/ v. `! t' L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; p- H  X* g5 N7 j+ w; H6 A5 u5 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 p9 J. T2 c9 y& A, m7 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 O. @6 r, r: i+ R2 Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 b  F. D4 G+ a0 [* J5 }+ e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 w: G0 ]% s' V  t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* c, y! m6 l4 N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. B5 D9 W7 D2 m. B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! C- {+ M  u" J+ R& P/ e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 Z2 G$ ], N0 }9 N0 I8 t2 [' G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( v' h6 X3 e& ^, r2 e<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. r+ \) H* ]6 }5 |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) |/ K6 [8 ^8 |, E; k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! s$ S$ G2 o7 }, D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 F. @. q. \8 Y! ~5 H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 F) |: L5 ]) P; j. D6 }# r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 l, a- H' E& v/ d% W7 O, k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 M: m% s" `3 w) B5 T<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 S# C/ A% m$ h# o$ w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& w+ C2 ~+ W5 ?- B5 k0 P, L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" M/ ]2 J% @% i' I3 Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  X4 s; i- ?2 S1 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ `2 f2 l9 g0 f* J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 n% w4 n5 j( J* B! \7 `: V1 A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& V. N5 v; o6 R1 B& M* M7 E; {. ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

& y4 i' E: {+ f# y3 C3 d( { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! Y, v/ [% I. g5 _$ h/ K  _) L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>