【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; Q# l/ ^0 H7 `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  M  F. |: \, d" W( O' {6 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ D3 H: l% d7 iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* E! h( i+ R  fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 C" x$ C4 g# h9 ^' N$ ]& K+ r" \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% p7 k( i: _) ?Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ `  H$ G$ [0 g. S# ZNothing can compare to my love
* ?" ^3 @! Y9 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- w& X! G; N$ N/ g4 b& zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* h1 B9 K4 w) eWith such a tongue as yours,
4 d, A: y1 N  j( L- j/ F& D) P0 {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 q. ]9 N( e7 K5 b; @0 {" uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& O) \; z1 p3 b8 r; {' T7 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" n$ z  G, {* F8 o7 [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 Z' R0 f1 w7 v5 ?$ f2 w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ [2 [' d$ j( K! T+ t- H% y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: Z6 |" }* g$ p4 t! d+ J% b5 `( v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 `% G3 Z: G! k( j" l$ D) L! R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ u) L. m( e2 L9 w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( E5 P' N9 X# k" o& s! Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) N1 x" C6 `/ N/ T3 t( S1 i# m9 ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% I. f8 T3 d9 z! N& h4 _. H+ ?9 C<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 F& ~  u! q3 T4 H2 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& n$ `/ v) k  P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# k2 X# |. O; q( I8 _/ S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; g! }8 V- U4 C$ M) R1 {/ N% Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) J1 F, G. u8 F; y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  m$ W0 i( [: ]4 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) S. H" u& Y$ Y1 y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# H2 j' |# J1 s4 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ B3 q/ l) t' h4 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 U4 b( q! Z7 h% k4 w4 l& P: d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- M* h; ]/ Z) j/ B) a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: m" o$ k9 u, u$ R' ~7 W* |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# F+ r/ f" @" S, \1 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 ]/ x# b7 _/ |" @/ h. o& ^2 _$ a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 X* w1 \" \" o9 g' R<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" p9 {. {4 |: h# ^& a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# |: D' l! f- r- v6 g0 q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; G9 z0 p" |% @" L5 o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 d8 c# [9 I% `7 c' Q9 @, Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>