【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
$ }9 f6 z3 L2 r- uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& {6 j( y% G" v( t0 @0 k! m! ^0 aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& J; ?9 G) t4 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% d. y) G6 f# Y8 J4 tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  g( C/ i" Q# t* L( I8 E# ZYou needn’t fear anything
" _1 I- V, P5 k/ v1 T3 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* _* g7 G& y* u$ K0 D6 nEvery other word you utter is love
  l4 U) A+ O! E: y5 x2 R" sI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 n0 S5 A% h0 o4 D2 n8 Y( Z" QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' v- g( Z( Z. mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ N" |1 m" _& u, FI regret not dying
  t% \% Y7 {! V  f' EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 G2 z8 M; Z' O/ ]% t# u# gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 G) q1 _* s8 F( f6 O* nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 c6 {0 W& O4 _2 M6 d7 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) k* ^. O( k. Y( {9 q7 O<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 s2 w  [1 h- Y  W. u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 E$ q; _) p* K$ N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& H( B1 R+ B7 j6 ^0 X- g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 }. f& R. C3 y/ c2 T, m& N! J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 K' j- z& V$ F3 b; I7 J2 ^2 {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 f6 ^6 A6 G! z. h) @0 ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 \  j& X7 p5 s: D/ @1 p<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. {# h! J5 H5 P<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* f! U% L' I( T6 i3 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; f0 @. N: H- O: v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ ]' i' l2 d8 _/ Q1 w! W, T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# D7 j, n, h1 k5 C# Z5 h3 X$ Q+ \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, O9 z0 a3 y' a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ {8 d1 y5 Y3 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) ^  q- j) k/ ]9 ?6 c5 y2 H6 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
, l# K  f4 @. |  Y5 ^) a/ `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 ~6 m6 l% \' r4 R; \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. g4 q; R& ]5 ]& o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, k8 R+ J& @8 R8 T  U$ `4 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 k0 @7 s5 O: X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 C0 Y& o* g  N$ d5 z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 d7 ?6 f$ }% F" `& N$ q, v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& ^, y; p) H. M( T我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! E* D5 ~; @  |6 z+ u/ ^7 ]) V9 m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>