【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, X( n, h+ u( \6 u, o  {5 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. W8 v5 n4 o' J# [, D: ]8 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 y" s3 z# E: m  s- \With the moon kissing it every night
4 {# V% W) F4 H) z# F" tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) l! z- E* w  k5 y& ^You needn’t fear anything
1 {; b* P8 I4 {! g# ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ f8 |8 q$ q' L: G1 H6 }* GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" x9 k) G" p8 g) v  dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 Z! K# t6 @% j4 o- j$ p: sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% j4 {, Z, j+ H* Q. Z+ LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 c8 W% _7 L( w. g6 e, TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 K/ i& q" c" t+ v% c5 _With such a tongue as yours,
% o' R3 ?* ?5 ^) o: D9 Q% SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 x, D+ x, P1 Z4 u# x% oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 X7 B' [! I8 {4 a3 h3 o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' h- f  M* `+ O7 k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; q, q' ^# Z* ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 D" @/ b! x0 {" a+ B* Z7 T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! I' G, K9 z6 ?) t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* N6 X: w: F4 w( K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 G9 C. N) r) e/ l1 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- n0 A1 G7 K: C( U% E9 g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 g. A+ x8 z4 w: ?5 D5 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; q7 `( Z, s1 W1 Z; C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 L! W$ \7 g( |' R/ }8 E, |" H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( q' `. m- u6 D; Z7 O4 ]1 Z) ~. _7 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# C" T8 k- @3 `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# A" K' a8 x- G- s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- ?' H) |% |1 S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* @6 B/ L1 S4 L/ s# r( U8 U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 s6 a3 c+ D6 `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 I% ?( o4 x" t! |' D$ J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( N3 z. `$ h" `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 D8 [+ H/ ?; U3 t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" K  |' o5 d7 D, g& @9 E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 T0 r, N4 y6 C/ G. U% @4 I% n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) l& ^& d/ O' m4 x. ?  o( \7 i0 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  C" a$ A* A3 k% t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 ^% ?: }- n6 N2 a# b. X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 U6 g( x) K5 V& u- D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) Y2 r! f% Q7 A) q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 s3 x# O$ u  n) o+ T% @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, t0 T! R* l6 i% P+ G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' R0 R0 f' j, T. y* a" i' [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* d1 f; P1 ]" p# N5 O  _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 J# U" g8 N; k0 W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- V% X1 t" q  e7 ~) b我请你剖开它

$ E' I3 ~8 |6 v+ R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>