【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ x0 s* i. L4 K& h* Y9 a; v6 gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( c9 ~  n9 C5 U% D9 W' VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) L& i9 b! s, H0 K# ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- U1 l" |( h( U# @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" ]3 L# \5 K1 A5 [  rNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: u, b: C  q) D- G5 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- t* h% ?) M5 j" W  g* {I want so much to see inside your heart
/ ^6 e% `7 q- [1 N8 rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  l7 ]7 F# j) ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 n3 u9 H& i( {. I/ M. a( u+ QI regret not dying
% P/ l9 ]- c) y6 K) g4 sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 l) J3 o' Z: W, V9 g2 q( C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; a4 W) }3 y: v7 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 J% u$ k! p$ Y* e$ W2 o0 j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 e# n# C8 ^$ \: s; T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 Z2 U! S/ I  ^& a# ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 c; m7 P- {( H$ J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( a; B, t; b% P5 W$ B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 `7 p  e( C1 u( S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 T/ K4 O0 r* J1 {. q) i1 t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 W% t. r& q5 j; V; m4 ^) b1 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- P9 n/ g! Q) b2 }- S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 _% d* \0 i: m& k& H1 k$ @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ f3 _0 r$ W$ J/ O3 n% X<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% }2 Q5 Q0 r! ?2 b. z; X3 J" d3 x! D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% T, B7 w$ C' h; j8 v1 \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 A& Z) F# Q2 {3 J" |8 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 A' v' e- U8 [: p+ y2 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ l: n# _) i/ c; w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ g( D) A* b  W* D  y# _& z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% W$ b' K( w  E0 w9 d/ i2 j! Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 |: q' Z6 e2 y5 a" O$ W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ I+ ^4 a, S7 ^. g4 N2 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ ~6 X% ?% W9 T5 [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# Y8 o, x6 L& @, T6 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( u& U: A( @6 _+ P$ U( q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! b0 g8 S# V$ P# W! P- d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 u- B! ?. X! i+ B/ c" a/ K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- Z2 @/ F% p: R5 ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 O. p: {& U* u6 H# n* B' _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# Y& N5 l% e6 U9 P+ _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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9 S$ k) F1 o; h& ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>