【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- u7 {$ z" U; vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# _: J1 y4 o* p7 B, k; fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 p+ W5 a+ `4 V( {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( ~2 T. y& F5 P; S+ V4 T! lWith the moon kissing it every night
  A) M% X- o- @/ U/ B: tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ R5 F' ?1 `: v" \$ \( nYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 o* U3 c1 y* j& h' ]* GI really want to know just how much you love me
% L4 l& ]( d; F8 x. u1 J, @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ q1 j9 c' ?' k+ TI want so much to see inside your heart
1 H, y' V, L  m0 T9 C3 O* XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( W2 v3 g$ n6 u% d+ OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 k9 o& R; H( [: B* U$ u3 ?With such a tongue as yours,
! v, k9 U5 T% SYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ X: f5 o0 B! L  b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" n# ]6 \  m% V, p4 c( T# Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% D" |9 [3 s4 S4 Z) ?' q' Q0 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( k. W0 T3 O) ]( O' l8 D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 L  V4 [9 m: K4 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& J6 d7 z$ Q3 l! \  @/ y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' t. N0 Q1 V3 F- b  X6 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% H% ]1 `, j9 D, V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ }  G! b7 o! M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# I& B7 }. }' q  g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; s1 K6 A$ I  F6 ]5 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( N+ S; g8 C% {; Z" E% X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- k8 @' b* T% ]8 ^% T& v, m1 d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 K0 b* w9 S7 j7 ~+ x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& D0 v, C8 ~) P9 S* M$ H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 r& s0 ~. b7 E# e6 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ P, ~. u* S# t; k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" M4 Z) ?7 t, H; `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; g! L& f  T1 Y2 ?3 g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 \5 ]$ \( f! e, E6 r, H2 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" {* L. C5 b2 M7 x* o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. p) {% i; d0 |5 s0 |/ _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 e8 `# @- W: n* Z0 z5 q( U- q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- C( u& T  k% ]4 ?0 X' |4 U0 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" @! N/ X8 a. T: I# a, @1 [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 B. ~- c- z9 v: _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 @6 h. b7 U' H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ |& O+ `, s2 V5 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 m  B& Z8 C: W- ]& L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ M  g* O% w4 l% T  s! D8 t7 O. N% H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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; O5 Q: v6 }7 n4 O9 x: A/ \! B6 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 [3 O+ o1 e: ^7 R: m" ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>