【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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, i9 ?" }1 c) |5 d0 V2 ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 f5 p5 P: A0 ^" k* ^! U; i) }# fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 u* e6 {+ i' I/ R0 x, PWith the moon kissing it every night
$ D1 z! \6 L' f* w# [7 q3 WSeeing the sky content with its love
7 o! q3 P3 e8 f" Y7 T2 u5 \- w, lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ l9 h2 P9 m  f! NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! b8 Q2 W' J9 [5 v" [% @) J* X0 i" LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 I. E( V2 x* B4 t2 V& RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( ?' j" u4 j8 {- p& PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 g- t6 |" a& S+ X! u- nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% b8 ~( y, {. ?: Z( \; ?/ Q- B- k- AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( ^3 i5 g3 F, U$ sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 N- |7 B* S; _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' X# x8 H2 i0 k3 f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! Z- x( E- W/ K( P( L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 ?# [" F- j' F6 A: }. y. ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 h5 ^* x  P9 A$ M- x0 H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. N; ~7 y1 E, r+ T+ i# T; Q3 D# `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 m1 i1 D" u5 n" Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 t% _6 S6 a% F" P( \2 K% D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ W7 k: I% t% m$ }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ k% o8 i' k" w2 u6 T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# G6 V1 X$ {8 z2 d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 C+ @; Q+ |- |5 s3 g9 g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% o! z9 T: \( A0 N, s$ n6 n) f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% o1 g7 |3 n) V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' J- a* i; P8 E! R% |2 q7 O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 d( |1 h' v) `& m, V$ L9 W9 v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 B% V) M% i5 E" a3 u; [<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 ]! l/ E; F  u# M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 I+ ]0 b, p* e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 C6 n" e" p' {0 Q, U  X0 b' g& K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ b6 \# t) R0 c# N* Y" d! b我请你剖开它

- ]9 T' A, w0 m" D, n* n& ~( b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>