【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 v" a0 P; g* |. @5 y# i0 v6 M歌词我附在后面。
2 V2 a2 s3 G4 D- ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
* N5 F8 f' T' z0 G. ]! ?( q: ~& \. gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 u, z- z; i: R4 wWith the moon kissing it every night
3 }1 _9 }1 G# H$ ]! Q9 t/ ~+ cSeeing the sky content with its love
! I6 L# s' \% t! G6 v( BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  l' j' Y& f1 YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, q* _' q+ j9 G& ^5 r$ }- E' mNothing can compare to my love
/ {; t# e4 w& |# u6 W0 H; eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! Q" T5 Q' n" o: b6 L6 RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 M6 k& Y7 f. x9 _( XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( S. |' {. p! G/ w8 r+ n& GI’m still filled with fear
  a& m: H$ j8 v) g* JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- w$ u, r! W5 [  sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ h( s' T. @4 g  U5 ~: wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" `) I  x1 a+ y* j. I4 C' K+ n0 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  q' z- d& I1 f<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ M( t+ P8 L3 Y. U" }/ U- y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 m! p% W2 c6 v+ m7 R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 p" @- g7 M/ m, c1 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 G' ^# x: A# I+ R# {" U5 u& `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ {, ~1 K- Z8 d& g2 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 J0 K; I& Y0 x* E7 H4 ^+ v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, `$ A5 u9 f& r# r7 u. A0 k% T$ r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# b0 `: S- Q2 u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: z$ g" R0 p* t+ L9 ^& w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& ?" I. M; h, A: w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- `, _' m# t9 Y7 }9 N$ Z$ k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- b3 q" M+ n6 b" }" a8 J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ a0 t$ |: d4 B# S* M, c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: D& E2 x7 Q# q; ^" b, ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 K- _- S' K  k- q3 c- z$ o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# ]/ I; u, g+ o* f% P0 N<P>I regret not dying</P>
! c0 D  A, o+ e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: L! Z* n( `! q# z- n  K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* i9 _+ l  j3 Q" P& v1 {0 X/ a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 ^0 u8 Z7 W# y1 p! ?. ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# S$ x: R( r  ~( P' d* H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 Q) v" n9 ?) z$ I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>