【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
% n7 y3 W0 H# b# ]5 D' {5 Z9 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 e& r; e9 F0 D/ H* s7 H* l4 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( k5 _  V* ?) Q! x8 r! ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 n+ Q8 [  \! d% ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; Q) X: t$ z0 a" z  R  G4 M* _You needn’t fear anything
2 W! k7 A, o, a0 }" S; nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: k7 a! ?* t9 \6 ]4 ^2 wI really want to know just how much you love me
) t% l7 v6 W( L9 X1 cI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! D7 U8 u- a' xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 u9 N; s: h4 T6 AI want so much to see inside your heart
5 x6 r0 ?+ `' B4 ]2 v; i% Y2 _" D0 g. ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) J$ k8 Q0 x7 g2 X( |# YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 u/ o  y9 v2 ?: F; e) uI regret not dying
! {& r- |8 G* q" ^2 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! S' k- ~7 k5 C  L# j3 z. \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# m% S% z+ T6 M/ a& t6 |! V: w; c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# C2 T; l  ]$ P3 L: B- x+ c6 k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# Q  j# \3 J& g7 ^2 b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ z& z$ c3 E# `0 I+ h: x8 J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: C# ?! a$ ?1 @$ U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# q$ E1 r! h& u$ T0 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! @7 J6 N  |& v2 r- l9 Q1 {; m/ P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ o  G! R5 M# }( i4 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' u) x& Z: z( n  l: l" ?% Z) d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! n  B. \2 m% i# R1 r, c: C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 x. l& z; J/ N" W  N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: N! v% _# o/ x$ b0 N  v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# `  g: z5 ~- \( M3 S; q1 Q% o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  D  e1 ~* i( @1 n! `5 @& E" C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ v7 N8 L2 q5 j; u  Z2 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. t2 G/ L0 g2 n3 d. W! ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- o/ J8 n  |# \' H5 }, U5 k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ s/ P) p% U# X; P9 S1 Z+ u: g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 Z1 ]; p: J3 L9 M% t- M1 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ c9 [0 D* @' K& g! K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ R3 ~6 t; o' P( S! |4 q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( V: K' G- T+ n% X0 d' \  F0 Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: m1 F6 X, J! M/ \! y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ q4 F+ V; Q4 C/ Z2 W8 O, a0 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# C. T2 @0 d! F7 o# r3 d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 r% h- G5 O% V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  v( M6 V) y3 s* j' n: X, J8 f6 X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 F- f$ ]( S9 I; g/ m2 W# [8 f  S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ Z3 c0 a) d# i<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 `: ?5 e% B$ `+ y/ f4 ^2 B4 u! l% [& c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 d4 r: g9 k- T1 h& _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( C) z8 v1 H4 r" g. u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) V7 ?& q, w0 D6 T5 ?! i9 }9 j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; D3 u. O! i. u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& h2 O% x. Y. V7 A" U7 B: |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. M2 M- k% ]- q- U' r  W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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