【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. |+ x+ }. b4 _' I5 M+ S, I1 z歌词我附在后面。
' B7 e' R( T# g4 N8 O, u$ l4 tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( P  e2 `( R, `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ K1 f- N9 H9 O; v" [* h1 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 {8 ?5 ^4 |+ F% G& pYou needn’t fear anything
* f1 d/ ^6 n, f" F) X# {- S/ y1 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: n) a7 o7 N8 m) c3 PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 e3 [8 I$ S, r+ x, @: g, F- MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, V( P7 r+ U: S1 m9 P& M5 RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ X5 G3 v9 ?7 p9 J6 Q9 ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# n* {5 B3 X1 v% Y( g" nI regret not dying
. z. _* Z: m. XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ r8 \& B( i7 A7 g: {7 J4 O, n7 P* zYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ W! t# V% B5 o; ?( n# \( ?# o% SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 v, K6 M; y/ Z. [& X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  L; h% P: p# Z1 G' R/ u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ S; A8 X! D+ G7 G' G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ E9 v* c; q. z6 ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 T2 _: l( ~& f- U; ^' [; z/ y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' `0 P- o& Z7 e, ]1 G6 n% N5 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 |. n. e, ?" m  O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* W% B3 f7 m, @3 o$ t  X<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' Q& ~& g# G* t* R<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. S$ \" \. J- [, `7 p+ e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 A1 V. ^6 ^: c/ U% V& t7 b<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ L& E$ y# C) G0 z1 X! o2 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ Q: g  x8 `/ e; C# [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 B# }  n  w. g0 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' J) i( J8 t0 _9 W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 A# ?% S6 C4 _8 L* |1 E% n; o2 _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. x5 o6 Y8 X; q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! f) H  y  E  X3 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' U8 V% p  x, r; c: \& U. K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 b. a5 c' x8 j0 W3 G+ }6 d* R7 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 ^2 b7 n( m5 x) z+ K; J. u( w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ p+ b" `7 X$ q/ r* k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 I; ]& w8 ]& @7 l( Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* u' ]( c- J; A' u  N<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% }* S0 C8 |1 l6 e0 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 }! P' E/ I' @% Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 C5 K1 w- ?2 y( T4 D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: r, f7 M; o- W5 W* [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 j" u! V! {) o7 x# F, Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; i7 ]* T' X, w$ b5 A4 O+ Q. f& q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; O+ o9 x3 D0 c8 y: ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 q! f  f+ A: _- J4 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 j1 a) J* h) f" n& {3 D5 d4 ]& v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>