【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) Q% E; Q. V, ^6 e; C歌词我附在后面。
( K) q8 a: r3 C$ v( t4 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, [3 R( ?: u" C7 `: c+ m4 dWith the moon kissing it every night
; u2 a8 T$ l5 n0 k! }4 jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 {$ U5 p. A' T: G; vEvery other word you utter is love
; h. f0 X0 l# h' S, E; bI really want to know just how much you love me
5 B1 o) k, m7 x" zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# i) e1 p! B' b) @: ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ ~3 H) Q2 ?* T7 z. A# P% e0 lI want so much to see inside your heart
. R# E2 G7 M0 y- }! AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, C" F- l# y! H; A) yI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% i, S3 v6 e7 P1 z$ TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ H9 m# ?: _9 D3 X& [/ T- a9 eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# k- x3 c, u2 X1 T* o7 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 V4 Y9 @; H) ^- x# T) G/ q/ i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  S; d" r; E  `+ b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  s& T' @9 F- {: C; r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 j0 L8 H0 X* f2 Q1 w1 |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 `2 l2 n7 d" f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% S/ Z+ Q7 ^8 `7 u, h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! Y( l1 @  @+ h% \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ u7 m1 ~) C6 ?6 l! X0 O' z3 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 I+ p2 z2 a& F' J& `6 h8 _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* [2 D* }/ f- [* D, E8 w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 t- X6 K+ s" H  V" u0 ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( V" {) @6 e' R6 g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
! n4 Q. k- M& V: ]( L8 K. F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) y7 Z# _5 r; d& q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" C; l4 e6 N3 r( H' n! u7 Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 a5 W0 d' I9 [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; R3 @( C) \5 X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- {: y, X3 {, W1 D$ N" d6 k- m- t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ N% i8 V; D6 Q8 w2 F$ X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 X9 W0 u& L! B( [1 Q1 X" v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- w/ {  }1 Q, ]* B1 @3 U, T6 Y8 F2 u$ J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" E# X! y; \7 F7 z6 `( a<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( q' u( C/ N; X/ z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 U3 T" Q+ l5 j7 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

/ }* @  ]" e7 e! H0 w! x8 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  N* @: ]' Y" w+ E( `( _1 w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>