【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 [9 S' \9 @) R% N& OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! }9 ]* j! M5 j* Y/ ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: j2 j3 R4 P( U) J, ?0 _/ iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ r% _' k) S! N0 @2 F# uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( Z: E8 d- s4 W% T3 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* Y3 `0 Y1 r) I' bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 e7 t( R% l9 x' qEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ {: |. ?" B; LI love you I love you with all my heart
: G: G4 M" v, x; E: |2 x9 ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. h. v. o/ V7 I/ K9 D" U9 QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! v8 B- t2 z% v. M/ Y; fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  b5 C9 j. a6 b# v2 j- QWith such a tongue as yours,
9 n% a7 ^% b+ C7 o2 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 d. ]! C4 {7 n4 X. |7 SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 Q' M. w7 ]6 _$ k* }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" j! X9 o" }3 |9 K& P6 p9 Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& T) U8 d: Z( P8 W7 ]" Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 o+ d5 O  D$ d/ S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& s5 q- M: F* K, d/ e* d% M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ _) O$ C4 e1 N, f  u! S5 o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 w% H$ S5 ^$ r- |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; R3 h9 z( p) P6 ?+ D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 _7 G8 _& X5 e+ k. X. B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 w* u- {9 X* b0 C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( e( v; h4 T, ~, ]/ a& o) H: Z' G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 X" z: z, e* R* r4 s, c4 w9 ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 o0 _+ p0 q  A$ V  p$ P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 T3 \0 v; H+ C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; i! e- V1 g: [3 }5 N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" l- o( ~, C% V/ N/ Z/ C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ [- Q9 M" j' m* A( B( o) \8 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' L0 P! D3 _$ [: c; S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. f" k7 C, Z! y7 i" F0 }: B7 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 f8 \; W, y, @3 A( P; q" H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 a* r0 q4 R* f) V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; `5 b, r4 \$ M6 [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  j% S6 [% R; ?% h$ o2 _' v; }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% b. D1 h5 Z- u# y* Q# j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* f: p  B0 H4 f" H. f2 e, ]6 [2 Y我请你剖开它

0 q  n7 l% M( ?- t 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>