【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' k( g8 `- G# X: c7 j  hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 s" T5 ?, c$ Y. r; J$ fThe sky is happy down to its soul
, d; V! a! d0 r$ D. T; f* L' u/ YWith the moon kissing it every night
( k0 W: s& e; D$ j& rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" |9 L( H- R. }+ U& e( J0 o& rYou needn’t fear anything
7 H- \5 j- g, }6 o6 b, x; V4 I5 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; ?) s6 F, U5 BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ @# v5 d( _. v. T6 X0 bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' D: i: l# A% e9 `& c6 WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 \& D1 Q& ?* `/ v6 HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  z4 H% N8 y- w4 e# Z6 kWith such a tongue as yours,
) h+ w5 y$ Z5 Z  tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ k7 \% b, E8 n4 L4 S3 uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  ~" Q3 t, z* H" R* \* }  y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ \/ ~: F& q, @7 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. n+ _5 K0 \; @' g( e6 e% C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; G$ I0 s' `1 C' [" y$ y5 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 Z; |9 B+ }* f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* h7 v1 z/ e" W& P+ l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 e& U6 b( B! n# r0 ~0 G; T% v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ U# k; o3 T4 {: y7 n3 p. V7 D$ H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. U& u4 Q( ^2 w; _" N$ f* v<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! p! U( j( k" w6 x4 F5 ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ w4 \* b" W# t2 A1 N* g& R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& F( v  k. Q. d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' s- E, e. w( A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 y4 H7 d- t. ]( f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 U. j/ S) b) _9 K; U1 d+ r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 J6 u  n  ]6 }/ a8 }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% M( u  `$ c3 a  e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; u5 p+ l1 _& H( g# w  q5 V) U7 T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' |5 S/ d: Q, L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- j; j' i- a% A2 O4 x  d7 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# |  u: a1 {3 [5 L" x7 o3 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& v# l. p3 r9 G1 L$ x1 S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 Q, i9 u# Z" R7 \2 p* M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ e# D! c0 J7 ~. S) y0 c/ f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) g& O' s8 D; j$ \5 W9 T" Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' V# [) M$ p3 y& ~<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 A0 Z" f- w& t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>