【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! z3 _7 t- U6 ?3 V- ^( ]5 I; MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- L1 ]5 f' S1 T5 _: \, DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ V: p: k& [6 Z# NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% h8 {( c+ l& W: B7 v$ h+ FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; S+ F" ]" u* `8 WYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 |% K( u9 {! `& p3 ~& qEvery other word you utter is love
" O: |- ^" y" D7 n% f( A( QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. ~3 d1 `0 {, CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 s2 ]9 r% K) @- M" H# OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* y7 Z% u4 W9 {With such a tongue as yours,
- \- H1 A- Y9 l2 V$ L" V; dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) ^' `5 M2 m2 v9 I1 H% f/ tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' p, o  T( L3 K( ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 c- E0 N1 h# j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- Y. w4 \' G9 n, w) {% n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' P( _4 n5 j! v8 t+ t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* l2 F4 G: H0 Y4 H4 }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& E1 ^$ e. {/ t! r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' `. p3 j, ~3 M/ G- O/ M  C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) D1 q+ a  k# ]- ]3 M5 `' I: U5 [( a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 z" A7 M) Q8 ?8 b, ^  F  E( V<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& k* v" c- H" b2 G9 H& O5 J2 E% K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: V8 _4 P( x" a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 K3 j; \' r/ c# C6 R& o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% D$ B: s; o$ m' |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. j" X- o; ~( |, }( L8 l; `. Z6 j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ `- A- {, {" Y% n. w# l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* z3 T8 ]2 |! B/ [! O# R. Y5 |) b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 o) l% H$ b/ L# X8 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 b2 n1 W  ~* S% p  q- D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! d& Q0 ]4 C$ t& x+ H2 B5 b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 f; R7 y/ s" R3 W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

& N* o. V  [: e1 E% m% T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>