【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 [) q. Z. k! z8 D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' ^5 u/ R. m" H, W7 [4 H  e9 xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 w) p- l' {; ]' u% eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ l2 k; u# s& |8 Y. T: _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ b( s9 M( W9 |5 |$ ]7 yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& d$ ]: {4 T' \) h4 Z3 V, F! y/ HYou needn’t fear anything
) V. r# H% b6 X% M1 c9 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' s5 Z+ k; @7 k+ o& s9 cEvery other word you utter is love
+ q1 U( S, O% g* v7 mI really want to know just how much you love me
: M$ P) a. ^) r3 HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. x  g- C% m. x( e5 d; O4 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ I( P/ [/ |  XI want so much to see inside your heart
# Q4 `) c6 J( |, ^, _$ gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- G0 f& V  z/ B. KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. x/ r+ j9 s5 PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 F+ E/ l7 H" |3 i4 iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 E6 N/ u3 v6 |! A/ CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; z9 @( G6 T2 s$ X( C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% i/ p! g  c; {) p: D8 H# E. ?4 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 `5 n7 }/ V- u1 t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 u  I, F8 V6 e; z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* W; O: d9 i9 [$ E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& @2 `8 f1 B/ q4 [, R3 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) l- I+ H% _) m! l; ~7 o' T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 F8 [  u( L3 f# H+ |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 i) x! J/ Y8 G  Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ d8 N4 e: G; I- ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, \2 d7 u/ r2 y: A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' G" ?0 W. y0 ]( V/ o( n3 \4 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 h8 d2 Y$ D; [9 G8 d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 p8 h. c* a6 x: v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 \" m' J% _+ f' N2 g+ |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% ?* O0 h4 F& x/ i+ |" h% m# b$ ^$ `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 v* u' G: U- y9 G% ^7 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 n2 h. U4 Y# m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% _8 J, Z0 s: q4 c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ @$ q6 m+ k  k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 Q9 \  ^% k0 [5 G6 J! g* p- @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* _4 R" y2 ~6 L" E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 z' F( Q$ X7 u9 t7 o/ M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 ?8 X! }, x2 [' g2 e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 q# A1 V! Q6 n2 B- |+ M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 D0 r. x5 s3 h( h. X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 K" a: X+ D, f+ l; i! g; N3 B) k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>