【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; e7 [$ h- y1 I# s& J% f- wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 h8 M5 T) x( Z" E4 d3 r: C6 ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. n& Y- x7 T# x) a9 c2 |& PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 m$ w# Y( h2 ^0 U$ h% FI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ i2 c# ?  t5 A/ {4 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 K! M9 A1 J6 M  U1 II want so much to see inside your heart
: @* r5 {3 `( c4 v: W4 X' CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" Z% P$ ^* {4 ?9 pI’m still filled with fear
' r- e6 y+ S2 f, a8 Z1 J2 z0 KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" [$ Q$ w. K7 A( BI regret not dying
; g4 L+ t" r. K2 c$ SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 F( T; u% R7 d0 G/ ~With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ x5 j( J6 ?; Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 p" e! r* q4 R: A" R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 i# x6 H6 i2 r  ]+ }; e7 u, T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 P3 L: S5 S. W& z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ e+ f- e% B  ?% m( [3 Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# M2 v' a/ s3 p: X" ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 S4 x7 x. t' a  P& N! ?: K<P>你无需担心</P>
( |4 C+ S- B" D# s  H; S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& \5 u$ T; T! h, n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 D+ ]8 }  Z) I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- G% o$ \- ^  z6 |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" b6 L  T, s; Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 M& \) W6 j! b1 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) }, _3 @: |: K' X3 l3 e+ [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: v  m, q. f) E7 d' ~8 q; @" s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: Q% L5 M$ @; K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! S! O- ?1 U! |4 P0 \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 G' ]. V7 j8 G" c6 y0 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 L& u* c5 Z( `3 h5 V! U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, @% o" K$ k+ F# H' z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! D$ f' ]; Q' k+ b6 B$ q* R, J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( g& p0 f' \2 D: d1 l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! A8 ~7 V2 P/ `3 y( D. |我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>