【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 D+ v9 n. n2 {8 ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
  k, A$ c- f3 P3 H4 T! s+ Y  }Making the sky glitter like gold,
- a* ~/ {# ]; ~' [( B. w: _$ YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& @7 F5 ?) d( V% u, _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# _" q( I) e; H5 s6 R; {+ g  O8 f& a1 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
8 X  x. @, U& l" p( O. {( `# [8 x9 cWith the moon kissing it every night
0 f& T; |3 a& Y* e5 N( `4 DSeeing the sky content with its love
' q, M6 W7 Q' ^6 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 A  z% X( O& G2 f' b  jYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; O3 m# m: w) q  C/ `Every other word you utter is love
9 t+ Z  k  d- p0 h9 \/ }I really want to know just how much you love me
, ^% l+ a# `' K+ a- @) JI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% n0 W$ H) d/ m% t. GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 D/ z8 l4 I) o) y6 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! j7 I+ e! [# V3 a9 ~  lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 {- \  e1 E+ u$ Q+ _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* |; f# W1 M. O- p, A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; D* P3 s  Q; @! a0 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 H" i" n) v1 F9 H1 O& p- J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ C7 w- O+ I8 p: y' e* H9 h# x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 d/ ?9 |# z" r) E( `8 {! f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) \3 n( ?* `8 [( S# j/ d0 t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" `5 O0 S8 B$ {: I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 l% h" E% l3 e5 Q5 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 |. Q' y- w( t9 D% Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, _( Q2 [4 y$ w( s: V  f, C* e6 J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: K+ ~9 X3 u% E, k/ f<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& L+ u. w# T+ n( A+ @* E' [0 f/ V& a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# h8 t, c; Y. n) C8 f" k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( i- k  S4 `' l% R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 {! l9 W+ O/ j1 G, t  f  h! W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; c( k$ C. A9 x4 _$ j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! y# K" I/ v, s/ K1 U  _2 q: v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 o' L7 O2 c7 j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% k: [) V2 l6 N9 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 b) W  I) @0 J4 C% L  f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ `  X3 Y( {7 Z9 G( @6 \8 O" O7 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! ~. \5 m& T, W: ?( p0 S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) y/ g& f0 B  I% V$ w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' [7 z. D$ Y& v+ n5 i1 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

. A! m6 ~" z1 ^" }+ j- x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 y- h7 D% E$ o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>