【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 I" g' P7 X- P7 \$ p7 x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& V) U! I% j8 m! G: g- QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 R! g/ L& R* B9 Z, DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  f3 l; [9 O/ _1 S/ wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 ~% a9 n& E7 ?4 B2 \* c: W/ `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) t9 `- e/ z. ]7 b& M5 L- vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! [/ W7 @. p! F0 N) vI want so much to see inside your heart
2 f& N3 o( F1 E" w+ W  l# `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" K9 r9 t) V* LI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% `' X0 B; K: `I regret not dying
2 s. }4 O6 ~9 m' f5 X$ {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 e( j7 i5 l  ?9 CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 D" p/ ~* ~7 z- e8 q5 {; sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* v& E) ^; T+ k# J0 {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) {6 f7 R: e3 ~, E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 t1 k& g% O; n; g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' O( D4 N2 }+ v6 B$ c6 A9 O. [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 H& D/ U- b) T7 e/ |2 G$ p! g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- d9 `. R% `, Y% u: w. Y/ h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 l, H3 I: |( Z8 o/ \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% ]$ Q2 L. n6 \7 y* c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. ^( m* ?+ S+ j" b, P3 P- \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% ?8 V& ?' o8 ~$ _0 J8 K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- w' c( y" ^+ p4 r5 I! C8 D<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 b% ^+ `" ~, f! M: k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' l0 |& J! c; D0 T0 y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 m2 X% I' [/ n! Y4 e' C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. z9 T  i* j# j( V* S+ H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 q# A6 _/ Z! l* f- ]+ U* G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 ?* `# m* o# O/ H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. e  y" e: z. i! ?! ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ V& ^2 S4 E8 `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" i. C, X: \) X4 G1 F9 j2 x3 t- @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 B8 w, Z9 J  \3 f! `) t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( |6 g5 W: |8 a2 Q+ X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 |2 q2 |! _. u9 ~, L; K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* J+ S1 L- Z/ s- `& E( [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>