【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 E% p3 `9 R0 K7 g1 E' d: Y6 sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" y7 M+ }6 Q) B2 b! M7 Q, \& ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! Z! @2 O/ z/ h2 x; cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 c$ o& T, j4 P6 D0 b0 Y3 xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 O; B; m9 v( v% X" w" EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. k' t1 E/ Y  K8 sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 i; U& f7 H2 o1 B3 N" `+ ?Every other word you utter is love
/ g4 j$ B8 M+ l5 \2 QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) B! v& {+ C1 f( z" |! h+ \0 pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ {0 I! b# x6 u  A3 T+ eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 p- W0 `5 g; ~  d: v" ]0 V* p0 BI regret not dying
% J0 Y% E+ U0 o4 `" R) u8 \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ b$ B8 @% L  y" a* w8 L& dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, Q; n2 F: u7 t, _, ?. m  g: C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  ?' T2 C+ ^  v9 C0 V- P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. h6 _4 W/ S( x; ~7 ^. e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: Y' r( J4 ]! t7 b. ]# F3 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- B- ?+ i  W, p+ \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 [6 S) c7 ]  d, B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 b8 ^4 P6 Y6 L7 J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" s! ^$ }+ @/ L0 [2 a& _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ }, N5 L& T. n7 q8 \- k2 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: M6 P/ V8 J6 Z( p: A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  @; A% r& ?2 ]+ E* z- ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 d$ B0 i( ~' Z- W! G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ C* {" z; d, m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 ^5 i% z8 Y- x3 V6 |# z4 @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 e  e% j& U$ Q: b! ^" _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# M4 A( E% W- A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. J/ j' H. j% Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 ~  t. f  ]/ W4 u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) }% F" A1 U* e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; r: X6 d  h' [# h# w$ v" i1 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" c; h1 p, z0 q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ q: \6 @& ]( y2 n. a7 N8 F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ o& @1 u8 t! ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 L! ]/ o2 a' j% z/ {& V+ g5 r* b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) k4 {" P# n6 V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 h4 h) k6 T/ N; p. e5 v+ R3 X我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>