【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' c3 e5 L- ?9 T# N7 I# A歌词我附在后面。
7 G' o9 @+ [# I2 h# G0 b: w0 oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& ?; [2 z+ L/ [2 p0 o2 ]# AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 ^8 a7 G0 _( A' PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# p' w5 b6 q4 ~6 O3 |! I' I; _The sky is happy down to its soul
/ q! F' W1 s9 l; b, C$ tWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* `' r4 U" z. e; v' l$ YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 b6 r, Z% M! K+ l, [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ B& V8 k) p: i8 }9 |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  {0 D, Q8 {/ k; q3 K! R2 rI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) D* g* H1 V' ?( A' n' \3 pI regret not dying
7 K- J1 h2 n2 f; [1 X: GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 d& t& j% ~( c% `8 o1 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. X4 _& z0 h& \0 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' y7 J' F7 f- z" s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ L+ j! g4 z$ K$ Z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* x2 M  b/ Z! d/ d+ _$ i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 L/ L* n( w! b2 T0 O6 M* m4 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% G( }% u' E, r% {0 B+ a3 y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% |! O3 d0 N* m) j, \! b- T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 U! o/ g2 K/ A* W8 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 J% ^# o3 K; C1 B$ {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- Y" x$ _+ p  \; j; a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ H3 N, z) U: A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; W' [4 t' ?3 n) ~. ?) a" k# _; D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. [: {& h2 X/ C+ t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# e) p/ h4 \1 b& K! E6 {+ J<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ ~& V1 f: G; g: z, @* b% Z3 N8 g' W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; R" c& [2 k3 s: U( [) Z, R0 f! u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 C4 ?9 \9 u( X( J# ?& n; t8 F' C  q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 H& ^9 X# N, _  j! h# C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# i" L0 m! A  V% c- h1 f, P+ b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ Z+ n. @+ p* U; _. ]! r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ k* i  l  U5 t, a! [+ j. f- X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ Z! S: e0 p+ d/ V; D& q* \5 D' _" e  O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  j$ X+ Q$ d( n5 k9 b& B( {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 p/ a7 s9 m* S! s( J3 G) L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 f: K! q7 Z. H* v% }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; N. X6 l$ }% i6 @! X8 k/ T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! d  L# z; h  r4 t+ d9 i5 w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! {2 ^" A9 y* e5 u$ K- y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 v0 n! }# U- s& w; o& Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- D2 V4 B: x, r* D; j+ V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 l& ^. s/ U: {* C) r$ _, V3 u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>