【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# R$ y2 o* o# Y. nMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ o. J1 u, K: O/ z$ xThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 I- f) v# N7 l# M7 EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: c8 a$ t: h# J) i& R$ @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& t1 Q1 C4 U& W( J- c7 W9 s& SEvery other word you utter is love
) q, B) h! E& bI really want to know just how much you love me
9 f; X8 s2 K& G: ]2 {! Z5 bI love you I love you with all my heart
+ q2 {# g  D( F  d7 Z; FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ h) u+ P+ g+ _" R0 JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 P9 W+ Z* w# }* e% RI want so much to see inside your heart
' O1 c8 G/ i' k8 H, s5 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" ~3 U& V7 W0 v: U3 l9 _( c2 N) \I regret not dying
0 w+ b2 v: n0 L# r/ Y' mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 ^' `* Q; K7 [" I, y9 A, HWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 o0 v' Q1 E. s. N; o: {" V$ bIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ ~: z, s4 _1 Z' q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# S; k! p- A$ Z% }: B) h' e9 Z* _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: ~2 L! {2 B2 G6 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 C, R+ o# o" x+ P<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- ~! D3 Y  n" t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ _; c9 i6 v1 u% D  Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- F5 J% y) o( V% y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! m, w% U, h* I% N( h5 E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! s! T0 q$ [" s2 O0 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ x  I  A4 E( c- I, f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 d) t( f( o- ~; A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  q" @$ k$ l1 ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( I+ r' {, L2 ], y& `1 x& u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. y) n$ O2 k8 J7 M+ D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. A: ?1 t+ X" F+ k+ B- T# V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 v, ?6 w: L* t) \8 F# \$ Y! ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. W' N, C8 R( B. Q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ y5 ]$ p) c5 w- P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 X5 X# M: B6 ~) H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ T% c3 f( p+ G! J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, y4 |( r, s/ q4 Y4 k/ O& \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' U1 m) h+ X1 ^6 X<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% W: h0 z4 I8 d% N5 s- @: B( y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. ?( p- \' P# M4 O" k' y6 L2 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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+ d6 s$ n/ A& b我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>