【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
: X+ T# {% ^$ Q6 |: ^# M5 N8 pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 j0 f  |& n8 \/ }) @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 `0 A0 Q' G. Y/ `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& F8 [) b+ l4 @. @4 f' JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 z- i; F( ~3 ^6 t# r9 M7 g, EYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 S, Y; g) t5 t3 R1 o' fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 k9 o. J4 {; E" K* o+ A& GNothing can compare to my love
9 \; T& P( `  z; I- F9 `  n8 z- nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 q5 G8 t0 i0 p$ a5 B; s1 _! k: LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. v. B9 ^$ I9 ]1 l1 m) II’m still filled with fear
4 D7 K# l8 ?# @/ v( h" i3 ?7 t3 KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( k3 c5 }0 Q; T$ L8 o& D3 e: uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 \8 @4 C$ H" ^3 iWith such a tongue as yours,
" L6 c9 t9 i) p2 S1 ], uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 q) w! m8 ^' `& n6 x$ j9 m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! c) h. L! C& L' a; r9 V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, ^8 N% P0 p( ~; P+ N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ {4 n1 M- O9 Y8 g6 _4 ^$ R3 P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 T, i& E: F1 W/ C9 n1 M<P>你无需担心</P>
/ K* q% l5 P  E6 C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ u# `7 k$ [# i9 R, U- v6 ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 ~: R6 U% B6 A+ {6 b$ F$ \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 r: G- I( W* L9 J# r  U: \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% u2 Y" q6 l+ ~3 \' i+ e3 C9 m# R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ d1 n( G4 \0 h( ^0 c. ~& l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ Q) a* J$ r! C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 V1 {" Z) X9 s# A  X% c5 _4 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 x1 z( b" l  @# f* a' G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# d5 x0 t, n' ^3 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 C' L& Q/ L4 W$ w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( H! N* g, r, c7 z# v, a* Q2 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  V6 V- _; u% |, @9 i# A: A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. p% t: b3 y+ a$ r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  |: _8 p; k; Q( j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& v8 r4 U1 R6 |5 o, e) h/ Y' M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 a! y5 @& a0 ]- N" o1 h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 N! x6 r* R3 d/ q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  t& K$ }3 B/ o& d  A, F/ ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 H0 W* e4 I% ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 y4 `& L# V6 L) c5 h$ f7 c' f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>