【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! _# S. y7 ?. {: I/ a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 w' P* J; D' }0 t/ _, `, x5 yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 L+ p' @( U; y0 ]$ j8 J. ~' sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 T) E0 M& V5 u% B; l% D8 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 {  y( o( c- N& u. @+ g/ e8 vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 w+ Y3 D6 d" G. f6 C% ^% SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ `0 c- A* I! XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. Y$ ~9 E5 v5 j0 |+ ^# ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! u% k' l( Y4 x8 o/ H' c% G, [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, k( ?! a( n( S; ^- @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' z0 E, ]8 D, TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: l# L8 D% K6 E+ |9 dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- H8 r! o! X0 d7 }9 n( P9 _  `% ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ P2 b# e# D  G( R: O% ?  ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ J& n1 S+ @+ @) b) m; c1 |/ U<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( q6 `5 p3 Q- y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# h! T2 }. g* b( Q: F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- ~8 C0 L0 o' w% X  n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' m! \: ]+ W1 Z7 o<P>你无需担心</P>
! G. H  [$ d) C. M* t: p5 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# h9 b5 j$ H8 ~: d- _/ Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ A; L: h( R, x, x* o3 ?4 F1 j<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; B, E' @& o' L' R3 T9 q7 O. S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& f8 S# K1 e7 @8 }7 {% ~+ _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' v# b$ i* J$ R8 \* ?) f% `, q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ {9 G& ]% m. y# R5 l3 E) n0 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) Y1 c: P7 f8 j/ ~9 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 G2 `. P1 V/ M) {* Y) ], ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 f% y4 e" @# i4 P- W$ L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 ~* b. S" Q% z3 Z  i' t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) Z9 E6 {: Y. I0 E' v; ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 z. r* m& ?* W6 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
& ^' m  _/ c. N/ }0 l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- ?' G3 Q3 v! x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" G; y$ P( g% h: U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( E% ^  D) k' |3 i8 T. I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* P  x( _- U, n7 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 f. Q0 u0 E, m* n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 N$ k$ x- C2 O$ j$ v" O3 E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! Z- N/ S4 H$ S- k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 y3 u$ [: v+ [8 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>