【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* m5 x$ y0 i$ g2 @* @8 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) g( l' |; V& @7 [+ PWith the moon kissing it every night
. y. T' @: S& t9 t8 P. w3 ESeeing the sky content with its love
! s- h+ l- R' X) n; JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 V# e# Y/ j- ~5 C9 ]* _  AYou needn’t fear anything
4 `" ?) \, E- q3 [( aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) ]! A  v" @1 g+ g# F3 J( [0 TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& h# H& t; z8 A4 E+ m# S  L' ^$ MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" K" r. D1 ?% A1 e0 YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 H- i  H6 x4 v8 ^5 H5 H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  o( M: u8 w9 r; j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& h, L0 b5 X& g: W- [& R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 Z3 Z- E3 ~+ O/ z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, a! Q. F- u0 B, b, X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. h4 w( O, T5 Q" C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 r" {, a+ @" M4 t" c# w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 I$ U6 `0 T/ z( Z7 T; H+ J  G9 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% e# Y2 F& }) A2 R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  h! [* b$ [* L9 Y1 @* n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: o# N- G' S: {, }$ M$ Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 w; A1 @: K1 j0 I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 }, x' @" w; Z8 j0 B3 }4 u, A. D2 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. M# ^# S, b1 V- w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: s9 Y& @, M7 p* V/ o3 H! i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 S' P+ X; }3 v# x+ s7 Z8 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& G" k- q" r/ K2 h3 q; K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* ~) P" d) \- }, u9 N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& v( H5 v+ i* T0 r1 X4 z0 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ S+ L1 j+ Y* [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; K1 {9 Z+ T5 Z" c4 |, d3 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. j0 i4 j( w( y, H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 Z, k6 x* i  N- o6 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# b$ X& {# K+ k* p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 E- I* R: O; M. r, w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! o2 B& m# w# U% r4 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- H* V4 Z0 u& ]2 K0 d/ d7 U0 ?8 a0 K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 K9 p' F2 [6 c9 \  f( `/ f# P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ S! [: l6 L3 [! L' q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 T. R' Q1 G7 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* A" R! T1 d9 k+ M: j0 Z我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  d2 X& _) O) y" x: O; R$ C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>