【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
' [9 E9 S( Q9 ^/ b( y
; _4 K4 f: I' W+ U
) ], F5 x+ U1 b; {歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ E' \4 l( j; ?! g8 A4 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. N3 ~! ^( ]' J1 ^# gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 E) C: p, H6 o5 n0 _: _/ }, iThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 C0 c! b# n' e# K$ LWith the moon kissing it every night
& ~6 D8 I* X# YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* y0 @  M2 D1 U- a! mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, i3 M" R) s. Y. m/ O0 }4 uEvery other word you utter is love
  J4 R* F  A" b9 cI really want to know just how much you love me
8 S$ }; H/ H* Z, j' y4 AI love you I love you with all my heart
" T5 t- X$ t3 g. W7 Z: @Nothing can compare to my love
8 ]" W1 H! w/ z1 HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& R4 s2 p" R3 |+ j  [I’m still filled with fear
0 ]9 i5 D% |& c7 ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" Q: {+ p; I9 {7 z8 Z, l2 n; hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 w. z* p  o# `1 [/ Q4 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- @$ b2 |. H% KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 l4 k% _3 C* O$ s
; ?  t- ?# F9 v4 A; A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( |  V# O+ Y3 L; [4 B6 w: S- U# E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- G# h4 o' X; H( ?1 d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, i2 ?$ D, p) A. `) a9 K  p, G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ y* o/ l& n/ C' O0 N( }1 H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- ?* B+ w9 {" {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 d* e- e2 `2 y: R# O! y! y* e4 N+ z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* R( X7 Y( K3 }- d% I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 x, G9 l9 L( `* w4 F* o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 ]0 x5 v- i' ^, l  k: U( E& F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  }1 \0 t9 L! _4 N. n+ X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 Q7 g. W" |1 S* t! M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% R! w1 O$ j4 g$ ~! t+ e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  W; s& z6 U% W5 e. W" ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 ?/ m- a3 f5 P  P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* g+ `% c* T0 p  Y8 q8 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% K  S5 }+ k$ U) g# E% |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 q( E+ d4 N& B4 P) t. a! Z4 }8 `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: Y( a  D: Y& T" C6 L5 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) J8 i# l! b! D/ |  M8 V; H/ K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& }( y2 V/ m6 F9 n' t+ }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- y' W" h5 E' [6 u* T4 T2 E8 W( x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& ]0 e7 V# X! X* Y: G<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 S( o' K! s6 u( _  P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 A2 N3 K$ W: F+ w* n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 ]( e) T: l4 @. i. I* l( {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" X+ n7 q, z3 O" P1 u$ u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, N6 _* T* W* \% Z& [. q- ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 Y  ?4 D9 X- d( l. y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
# w' w% I# w0 v) h3 f
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>