【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* H2 S+ N0 h  Y$ w/ u6 ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 u$ O- q/ I: Z6 a# OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 k+ I( }$ _0 o6 j8 M+ I% IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 S  T! M2 D5 Y9 G  q, gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 F( \6 [" r! k/ o+ CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# x7 O1 P2 |  l' ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 p2 u- P+ N0 i+ v" EYou needn’t fear anything
  ~  l: C( z# AMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  ?( |  e' T; f/ j8 r4 aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- y/ a/ y4 A6 a% K4 sI love you I love you with all my heart
5 i: S1 Z" P/ Z; f% b; ~. t1 A6 E! XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ F& p0 ~4 P9 U6 f( MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' G! B( o, P1 Y9 K. }" II’m still filled with fear
8 s% S. M' V# ~$ m& ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; I- R0 n: }- Z9 f$ h% ?' c$ MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# _( o4 M9 E7 A  q" Z2 C1 [2 k( I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 s% U7 ^. h1 }0 d3 _' g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! [! T4 V; f, r- c4 h# H) A$ U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 z( X5 m" b, e3 z% O  A5 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 D/ s7 l% }2 Y/ j: V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ I& b: s7 ~. |; i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ F) M! f! c+ {+ [" b: K/ ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 K4 g4 J0 r& b6 N( f9 [; l: h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 @- d1 D' ~* e2 x% N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; M# A1 L7 ~3 J( s9 S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 k. u3 q5 C) f: _$ W! k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. e0 {8 P4 E- {$ n# B; a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 ]( _, H, H. k  g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 o( g# v9 t' M. j5 y: M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 s: T% |6 N1 y- u0 z) L" i. n' g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ c' _& \5 n: R8 ]7 x8 ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& k/ X" y) j/ x/ e9 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 y: y$ \2 {. I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  A1 w( X0 l, S6 r+ ?) E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 b/ T9 I8 g. `  l6 q9 R' @: L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
, }/ A! |5 w7 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 r+ F* p9 e5 l/ L! J" W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& F4 j" s* O+ F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, P8 s: @" l) e8 O8 N( K& Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* i; s( d$ K9 Y" g0 p8 k. D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 ^+ v2 w/ P' E1 B2 _! L4 N0 a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, `  i# C% O5 L6 z  X7 b0 W9 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>