【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; t. A! p$ Q  o. W8 `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" w) R( o# ^6 F# @. m6 |) p1 NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' {0 ]% k( t8 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
* C4 X6 c/ l# H. |' @' F9 Y& l; lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" E: v  V. `$ ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. f0 {) Q6 ]; ^* iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# l( h8 ^' n" gI want so much to see inside your heart
) l+ y* y# A. q- a. MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( @6 I: l& X2 Z- _2 T& C: K  LI’m still filled with fear
- N( }9 z' J* w$ E' ]& tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' E' v* @: J0 ?* ]With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' ^9 X' y  K7 L# |$ N/ j( ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 y5 A3 s0 W% O) C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, T2 Z$ [6 b  F2 b! O. n+ l  i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 o! `" B/ r/ U0 v# T' F, a, e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( o7 M# ]' L9 I, M1 t( u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% k) ^! S3 {4 w- _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. W8 a9 P9 K- b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ L: h9 V/ E& ^2 @' N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 B$ {, z) v& W/ V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 f" ~3 @" d2 J4 M2 T, P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( a7 O, ]* Z+ P+ T  H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 f8 i7 J; C& Z* [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' j4 c; s. j. r4 Q  H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# e+ i# E- g! w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' n2 U% O* P+ f2 g6 W' }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# e: e6 _! S$ m2 b( Z& \8 ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 w7 F5 P& B6 \2 Z; t+ P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 b( T) }% w9 p: K& a& E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ ]6 S0 e, J- f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ X8 L4 g( [1 V& w. M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! T, O. q* [6 ?  J& T- a) M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. N: G1 ]7 B' W) L3 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; M& b8 j  v2 K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 N/ C- D7 h* `8 |7 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 Y9 k$ e* _4 g% f! p; a9 X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! m+ y) I" x, l: s' Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, s7 W# W% S7 x3 }' l* z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% g! K3 F* X7 Z% z0 e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( W6 ~  k) T9 ~# ?' E2 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' b1 F' C, B7 Z; H3 e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 ?( G* z3 \4 T; s7 O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 }& _& R' ?5 |1 K$ A+ n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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  s; e0 y* ^. r; h, |( Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. a5 \  K4 i6 G4 \7 l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>