【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 T( `! S* P1 Y" T* z8 W1 c歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" E7 }& e3 V6 T" k, Q4 YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& w6 e5 P6 T$ @- s# M6 HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, L7 `7 a4 D# F9 T$ V7 wYou needn’t fear anything
$ L9 Q9 }5 t1 I3 z3 ~6 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# ]7 b" _0 ?5 k) N7 oEvery other word you utter is love
& M4 R* v3 x- J; c5 g9 rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 j* m3 t; ~6 M0 S+ }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, ]& e1 O+ v9 x0 ]$ TI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, a7 z) {1 V0 x9 K4 zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( ]: r8 y) P4 _0 }! N) `  M4 qWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; A% _! e; Q1 Y, J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 {3 r3 a  ?9 g1 m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ w& @' R( S6 w( m8 q" C: ]  u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- T3 b2 P; e6 K$ M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 u2 o+ r% m) e. q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 ~4 S# [8 p! v8 C5 A8 e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( L% Y$ `- f2 P& L9 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ F# O9 E0 L* N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 [- O" b7 f; }1 J* z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( h: ^5 C8 Z5 e1 e( H) ~) |2 u- f" U9 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" O' m2 w0 C4 _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# C- {1 |6 H+ u( q3 S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 d, C5 ^! j8 u% w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* D; F$ h3 q5 t* b  m+ y- |1 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 m3 m! U4 W; A" L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ v! M; F' z: i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( K4 U! W4 c: s4 |: v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. h1 i) O3 ^4 Y5 O9 x- l% c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 X4 y7 r$ h" k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 f2 H5 F/ C* V$ I7 J" G0 d1 K+ Z7 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 o/ l# \' ]9 w5 I% W. o- l8 d- N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ H* I" G  X# q2 C& Q! P3 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ s0 K5 i- u6 v/ U( [! c$ s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 x6 u3 S& ?8 B. |3 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 A, \8 `3 d1 b$ k' R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: n$ @$ e, B! r  o* Y+ u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* n9 Q& U. `6 l4 n" v% C5 v* ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 O: ^& \# ]5 y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 O- k6 L3 a, l3 N+ R6 {; E( `  V4 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 F- B/ S) t$ F4 V( A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 J6 i# N$ j$ b& \- a1 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, T" X! C6 F% A我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>