【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: x' F" h$ v) ]# A( g* r歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 v: J, `2 U, R2 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) B' H- o( `! NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( T+ N9 D* y0 G( r' W+ lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) w6 B. Y% O9 A' uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ y  d  W, @  K2 u; pYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 z% ?: k' X' \5 @+ t$ D$ A0 ?- P# OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' ?  `6 ]7 ?: zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- R8 u$ j0 ^. d" v. TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. d8 b! N9 v; W  B) v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% \8 n+ c- c9 S3 O+ X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; p0 ^& m* n- |( K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 R" S) y' _! L. I3 g; f' J" R" U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" S, ~2 |6 o( z0 v2 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* ?! {+ O$ ~3 [" d3 g/ D7 Y3 f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 C, z, Z- ]& A, D6 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 ~8 }8 y9 y  p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- G9 c) @# B1 v% ]: F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ s8 u! {% L9 c$ J6 U" |7 t5 J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* ^% e! |* r  N& E9 f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. e% E3 z) O: Q+ m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 q, e5 @, J0 l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 S, {1 j# P- l$ @* d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) [% c2 b  j3 h9 m; D. V( V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  r+ [# o" K/ j- F1 W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) T9 N/ n0 o0 U  R, l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 c! S( R8 e# O% O( X5 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 e; \0 x4 d- P- S" G( b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" S$ }: f! L" c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" n  g. ?0 r# ?1 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" ?# R: i4 Z4 P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ k; y/ N- _) c; [: z8 I/ v+ b<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

+ M: [6 ^% b+ a! m! N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' r& g3 N" r$ G: z# L: Z2 u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>