【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 q, A4 e# S3 v5 d2 ?' l* sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! ?5 N, ]. \" S) E' q5 C& U3 V7 yWith the moon kissing it every night
- Q$ b/ j8 b  M0 [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, M3 Q, d: ^$ p. CYou needn’t fear anything
0 P4 A+ ]1 a3 H/ g6 `; B( C& pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ ~3 [: W, _% }* A( fEvery other word you utter is love
; e+ U+ d+ A5 H5 n4 E6 ^I really want to know just how much you love me
+ ^; `' m$ t% @) pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 [7 {/ Y' `( z, iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 z; ^, D' T! v0 wI want so much to see inside your heart
( p5 z1 v7 a* n) _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 V; F& m% X" D& v2 ^- x* q9 BI’m still filled with fear
7 V2 n. z. L* L8 {: v( P/ VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; \3 Q) r' B2 Q  Y2 L. [, C" t2 fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- C7 @; b" h( `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 X/ C6 r6 }, G  y$ L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: S7 N% [, F/ ?* }- ?8 `! ?. [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 }4 @% m) h4 Q1 }$ x+ T: |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& s+ A# j3 H. s; _& |% q8 J1 ?- C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" X7 s. k3 r, y* K8 ?  I, c! w  E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ K; f$ E( {- W. [8 H6 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 X8 E; g5 P1 ]" v  w5 u3 U2 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! l$ @" x8 M+ q* G& ~" Z! R& ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; V) E$ B$ d; u3 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( A* b5 q/ w% P1 a) `/ Y; D1 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 A3 H+ J8 Y0 t$ V6 j7 N; `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  G6 u0 N1 |- L4 l$ F4 `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 \# G* B! L: {9 X0 ^1 X  N1 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( H. g4 L% M. e% G% _/ Y5 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' o) I( g, Z8 a& e* J7 o( z& V5 n% G, m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 U3 \, Y0 \* o4 y1 z# V1 T: B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; B0 e( t1 s5 c0 ^" w' _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% w7 o! o- L+ R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ {1 h) `% \: [6 L4 n' z: I9 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* M1 H4 K" d/ E- |  P" ]1 |9 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 L2 m+ ^# k/ Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ n' |" G9 h) A! P" i2 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' R* `( Q8 n! R: e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) N+ n4 G# W7 D  w3 Y& _/ J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# q8 e  J  N! G* S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( q: ?& v& w& _4 N+ p: O( E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ D& g8 j& B! d: ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! N6 L# R0 ?4 w3 G! l<P>I regret not dying</P>
; G! W7 u, m6 ?& Q0 d# V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# n& q' t9 |1 T0 S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 `" _  T; h0 r1 }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 ?/ I& o1 H/ K/ }1 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: s3 t9 d! B) D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; {, U) i) c* D5 Q0 f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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0 o. Y; b) b" a) ]+ B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 M" A" u6 V) |3 N: e0 N& Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>