【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! Z' @2 v2 p+ I歌词我附在后面。
; q1 j' k  a5 j$ W' hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" Z/ P" P  Q' d6 p& D$ |8 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ T1 k; O5 v3 o/ ]3 d6 kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ X# j3 q$ _) T  i8 a4 WThe sky is happy down to its soul
. n2 T: V3 n& Y) v9 iWith the moon kissing it every night
! }8 V3 `+ P: h1 p& R9 w8 w5 gSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. p' D- g0 R, o: Y* d2 M4 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' ^/ r7 e5 D& q5 Z+ L" bI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 [- l* z: q% G  w& ^" ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* c+ y8 e, S9 U8 [) @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 b+ H0 u" ?. w3 Y& p- Q0 A& zI regret not dying
. d- g1 T3 v2 ~( l+ NI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, Z: L7 {* A. {5 T1 t' n- ~  YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 N5 W7 c2 y0 M6 J7 e; @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, w7 U0 D6 o1 y" C# }5 _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  }# F/ e% |* [& r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& H0 Z9 K& l0 f+ n1 a<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, L. S" v/ M3 M; d% P3 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ S1 X0 b8 z  ^, N) u1 j5 M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ e2 {/ w) A( F- Q" Z: h* E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( w- ^. |, O# s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( a3 k6 o( q# I<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; Y! a" o& _* U7 w( @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 b! G6 ~, z) `3 \; U. ~$ G4 N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 {0 Z. ?0 N& k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* J4 `. i! P% K$ ]5 T<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 B: {% c8 G$ V) C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- o% Z+ Y! z% A! l5 H% _- o) t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 \# a2 L9 M) U/ e8 l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, Z" Q9 D( @1 o6 t& L, o* ]/ N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 }- S* s* G7 M+ K7 n/ f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  `/ l$ v6 h) V8 w6 B  _. Z+ k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: C) h2 ~& D$ d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 q, M$ t& ]3 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ u' W, W4 r8 g- C( ?0 y0 v9 t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! h2 M: ~- U7 O- y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& c3 E2 p7 U, R% I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 }; s# c/ T8 Q- g' N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" T' R% @- k! O/ K  C8 r, ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% S9 v* s* H6 }/ d" }<P>I regret not dying</P>
# j0 _% N4 A2 N, M% E3 L. J9 f7 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 T% }/ a# \( B" [; a/ K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 r/ i! I) M- r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 Z! S, M) l3 U% x& _9 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& @: q  u* G& M7 Z5 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( U" O% o4 R6 @, Z! b& J" K<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  I& G' E( I* G' E: R' h5 l- N0 W: c# ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 }' |4 P. Q5 S<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; ~9 z4 q- r3 A$ i/ }( L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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9 s2 A7 j- C; s2 l' k1 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>