【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! g. B* T, m  W7 {9 oThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

: ^5 S; V- o/ m" r6 N我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
我愛你  

From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
! Y9 M" ^! t0 s( }3 {! V, e你已經深深的佔領了
我的心
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We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

& U7 W8 U# h) _縱然朝夕相處
/ M$ ~( I* Y& A+ s$ r還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" O8 ?5 Q( I/ s' E" hI would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
0 X. v% w0 A& j* e搜尋著你的魂
8 u7 {& J9 y' j1 A我也許就能了解
7 p( Q6 R* F, `' X1 D3 Z你的心情
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' W' ~1 s% g: n8 k% q1 k) W+ G. iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單的一句愛
& r5 L' d% y* {) c. y為什麼
8 u2 L3 ~& w: g  x- J3 ^3 [. W如此難以表白?

! R, i3 {) W# ?' pI want to confess that I love you,
0 B: w( z" f  x# _# P- zBut I never did

$ m! |0 {8 c: o  x9 g" s愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' L$ J  W) y% y4 w2 g# |3 a0 a也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
0 S  B6 _" s7 `; e5 a. iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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, m  ?, L/ s% x% W1 X8 {希望今天還不會太晚
5 X, T  M8 v4 }( o6 D讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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4 C- ?4 D/ s$ S0 ?$ y) DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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' [  P0 D: T7 c( Y不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
/ ^0 ]6 V% {( E' ZEntrust my love within your heart
2 M! M! Y& V# L' _/ d6 O+ I$ A可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

' s' T# J! ~' ^, Y0 t愛  簡單一句愛
- d- c1 q" ~: ?1 F& G為什麼如此難以表白?

- d; E: N' n' d0 ^# EI want to confess that I love you,
! z3 ^$ U; X& f* |+ u; N# ?2 t( [  IBut I never did

$ s% X! O0 l4 q' D0 p愛你 我想要告訴你
+ s6 d4 ^) W9 o9 g- ~- K) @卻還是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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, [2 h: w" V4 x2 u9 d0 M也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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/ H) ~! J4 R# G+ w! V6 d* Q1 m7 u6 _希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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# ]3 g0 \) g' S% f$ Q不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
5 m- c9 T2 X. jEntrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
6 b! F3 l/ j) j# C# M) |) U) @( |) ]托付我的愛
+ ^+ |! l" ]" f# s7 Q1 L, W收在你心裡

* U, V0 l! s# d& n& {Can I entrust it to you?
- P! E; p2 f4 Q8 w( P% I- X. AEntrust my love within your heart

* }6 Q+ m. q0 ~' J可否讓我托付給你?
  D: u! @, G9 l: u* `- C% G  g托付我的愛 收在你心裡



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( M* G! x2 K, R$ i; k4 M5 R对唱曲参赛译稿
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6 p3 a# k+ [! ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 N4 I# v# n8 G8 L: D9 }0 k6 [' C: jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

! Q7 ^3 z+ f4 k2 D皎潔月光下
: X( D* K$ a3 c# v天空金銀閃爍
+ \" s  c" E. Q: `* T& L* k3 O凝視著星空
: P; f/ t- Y) `/ ^# y9 H% K我心充滿快樂
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* O. ~/ X6 r; S* HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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) w9 f% W* F: i月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
: S4 c, p; D' a3 a9 R/ [月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂

8 t( _* @" J* T6 ~- r  d/ ?It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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+ D- @' m6 N9 M5 ?! H我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
7 ^3 g, D! q$ |: u4 u終將逝去
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You needn’t fear anything
4 ?" o- m% \4 v, q! {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
  h5 n1 s! N& _4 y- _% L愛你
& L" q$ ]. Z9 |! @7 A8 w堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me

你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
- h& ~0 G- t8 rNothing can compare to my love
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1 V% s1 W  A. B: Y$ @我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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  I$ H% ^, \6 l" ^& j; u7 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

* D# H* ?% \9 J1 a; OI want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心
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1 |7 y0 x7 u3 U) QI invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! S( C8 E  w5 H3 @! c; i
% @% x- }7 ^2 v2 J我歡迎你將它打開
0 ]9 I7 e. Y# F0 B6 _7 |# |我願意用生命
來證明我的愛

% U3 D+ y' {" |& T: R7 q# }I’m still filled with fear
6 }; z8 E! S; F% M( Y6 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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7 @# K5 p. c, Z可惜我未能以死證明
我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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6 H5 o4 f3 C' [$ b3 J  zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it

, H! |5 @- O9 D這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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) ]3 C1 v! N$ N0 q, XRambling on about a thousand words of love
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) }: T5 Z" p3 u) _* b訴說千萬個
. h$ C( u( p! ]$ w8 V愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
3 w1 V# ~. r. \. W+ Y& k) q9 _; txxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒